Feedback from Miss Stone

I need to:

• Produce my whole completed storyboard including credits
• Confirm who would produce and distribute my film and actually look into why those companies produces films and what sort of film they produce
• Further evidence of rough cuts or final opening sequence within the next week.
• Upload the music and sounds that will be used. ✓

Digital Big Ben photo

 I'm going to digitalize Big Ben in my opening sequence to show that the film is set in the future.

Green screen fireworks to edit into my opening scene which takes place 'New Years Eve'

My logo design.

I think the alliteration of clapperboard creations combined with the old film reel gives the logo an elegant appearance while keeping it obvious that it's a film production company.

Changes and reasons for change

In the practice phone-call sequence I'm very happy with the location the camera angles and the music which I wrote for my final peice. I used a composition in E minor modulating through C with a mixolydian tone to create an effective and dramatiuc peice which slowly picks up speed to build up to a climax, I think it worked effectivly and will keep it.


In the rough cuts I realised that I need to change the time of day. In the sequebce I noticed night is a bad choice of lighting to film in. Instead I'm going to film the final opening during the day. Also I'm going to write a more obvious script as the reasons events take place have to be clear and coherant.


I will also make sure that I have a reliable cast and crew to help me film as in the rough cuts I had to play a character while operating the camera because an actor dropped outl.

Practicing with the music I'm planning on using, also practicing camera angles and editing for a phone call sequence which will appear in my final opening.

I think for a nighttime sequence this is well lit and easy to see for the msot part but there are several moment where it is difficult to see what is going on. I think the music is appropirate due to it's build-up and think it effectivly reaches a dramatic climax.

rough cuts