Review

Looking at the footage of the action sequence, too much of the plot is given away in Major Tom's speech. Me and Callum discussed several different techniques to sort that issue out such as an establishing shot of the scene and a high reverb so the audience can't hear the conversation and yet still fully comprehend that a conversation of importance is taking place. Eventually I decided for my edit I'm going to put a second audio track over of Callum's charracter's thought process, that way the audience doesn't hear the plot.

Another issue with Mr.Fenwicks speech was the lack of emotion and accent, we got Bruce Partleton to dub the voice of Mr.Fenwick.